9 Words to Dump from Your Resume And the Hot 9 to Include

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Think of the hundreds of resumes that cross an HR manager’s desk every week. It’s truly a mountain of paperwork they’d rather bypass. With the job market being what it is, applicants and recent grads are cranking out resumes using the same accepted industry standard formats. Nothing wrong with that. But there are subtle ways to make your resume stand out from the rest.  

 
One way is to be word wise. That means dumping the standard weak-weasel words and “amping” your resume with power words. Words that will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye.  Words that will stop a keyword scanning program and shift your resume into the “take a second look” category. But first, the words that need dumping. They include:


  1. Strong
  2. Exceptional
  3. Good
  4. Excellent
  5. Outstanding
  6. Effective
  7. Driven
  8. Motivated
  9. Seasoned


These are self-aggrandizing words that your references may use to describe you. But if you use them, it sounds like you’re patting yourself on the back. They simply lack objectivity. They’re qualitative and can’t easily be linked to quantitative appraisals of your accomplishments.

 
It’s much better to use the hot 9 words that can be connected to specific areas of your performance on the job. These will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye. They’ll also be flagged by keyword programs, giving your resume a “second read.”  They include:


  1. Reduced
  2. Improved
  3. Developed
  4. Researched
  5. Created
  6. Increased
  7. Accomplished
  8. Won
  9. Under budget


When using these keywords, try to link them with specific facts and figures. This adds credibility to the words and will draw the attention of recruiters, HR managers and most recently, applicant tracking software. 

 
It’s an unfortunate fact of life that most companies now use some type of applicant tracking software. This software looks for keywords that match specific job requirements. Some companies digitize the hundreds of resumes they receive on a daily basis, store them in a database, search for candidates using keywords, then create interview call lists. The bottom line: If your resume lacks the right combination of job-specific keywords, it will end up in digital limbo, never to be seen again until a programmer purges the file. I know, it’s brutal and impersonal, but such is the world we live in. 

 
Here are some suggestions on the types of keywords to include in your resume. They should be job, task and industry specific:

  • Job Titles
  • Product Names
  • Technical Terms
  • Industry Jargon
  • Software/Hardware Packages
  • Job-specific Buzzwords
  • Degrees or Certifications
  • University or College Names
  • Company Names
  • Service Types
  • Professional Organizations


Creating an effective resume that will get noticed these days takes a bit of work. Much more than just listing your accomplishments. If you have any suggestions, be sure to include them in the comments section.


 

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  • Dorothy Barker
    Dorothy Barker
    And what might your credentials be that makes you the "expert" on resume writing?   I had an "expert" tell me that I should leave off my military experience.  Why should I follow your expert opinion?  What are your credentials and which company do you work for (and for how long) that allows you to utilize your knowledge on professional resume writing skills?  Did you do any research that supports your analogy?  If so, I would be interested in reading your results.
  • Julie Davis
    Julie Davis
    While I certainly agree with the author in emphasizing the "new" words on your résumé, I disagree with the idea of deleting words like strong or increased. At times, when looking at various job postings for a type of position you'll see that certain skills are consistently being requested like "strong communication skills" and if that fits your profile, I think it should be there.
  • Mildred White
    Mildred White
    Thank you for the information. I will definitely check my resume.
  • Wilhlemena Taylor
    Wilhlemena Taylor
    What if someone is highly qualified with life experience and does not have a college degree or certification? What are his or her chances of landing a good job?
  • Ragu C
    Ragu C
    Great article & Coaching tips!
  • Joan O
    Joan O
    Thank you for the information,
  • Shirley S
    Shirley S
    It's worth a try....It can only help.
  • Arnold U
    Arnold U
    Wow, I have 6 of the do not use words on my resume now. I will try to eliminate them, but its gonna be difficult.
  • Lisa G
    Lisa G
    With these great tips I will improve my resume. Thank you for helping me to reduce my word choices. It will be  a new and created Resume that I will have accomplished. While most companies are under budget, The HR department doesn't  want a Resume or employee that hasn't won them over with a snapshot of their Resume.
  • Patricia H
    Patricia H
    thank you i will remember that when i do my resume
  • Jarvis W
    Jarvis W
    Very helpful information!!! Keep it coming.
  • Nashawn B
    Nashawn B
    thank you for the insight and very informative lesson
  • Kelly S. H
    Kelly S. H
    Thanks I think this is very helpful information!!! Time to update my resume!! ;-)
  • Kenneth G
    Kenneth G
    Great information, after reviewing my own résumé I had to go back and revisit my resume and dump many of my own weak-weasel words which I found.
  • Donald I
    Donald I
    In this job market today you need every advantage you can to give yourself an edge to get your foot in the door!
  • Thomas J
    Thomas J
    Great article. But I wonder myself do HR Recruiters really go through the tons of resumes they receive or does employment still continue to be so favorable, that is, who you know gets the job? I am wondering also about your address on your resume. For example, if I live in City A in State B but I am applying for a job in City C State D, how much attention do recruiters pay to the address listed on the resume? In some cases, I believe these resumes could be rejected because the recruiter might think about moving expenses. Some jobs list they will pay moving expenses, some list that they won't, others do not even mention moving expenses. Thoughts?
  • Margaret S
    Margaret S
    Suggestions were clear and easy to understand.
  • Joseph D
    Joseph D
    Thank you for this vital strategic résumé tip.
  •  Larry S
    Larry S
    Interesting, I will use their recommendations.
  • Maryann P
    Maryann P
    GOOD info. I will make some changes..Thanks for the advise.  Should be helpful in the cover letter also.
  • Pat D
    Pat D
    Very Good! Guess its back to the drawing board!   Thanks
  • Yvonne H
    Yvonne H
    I recently had my resume professionally updated to include some of the power words suggested. As a result, I am interviewing more frequently......not offered a position yet, but I am interviewing.
  • Katie D
    Katie D
    This was an interesting article. I can see the difference between the old words and the new words. The new words describe your accomplishments in your current and past jobs. The old words to sound more like you saying " I have excellent organizational skills, strong communication skills..." instead of saying this is what I actually did for my employer that was of value. I do understand what others have pointed out in their responses but things are changing. You must use your resume and cover letter to get the interview, only  then can you truly sell yourself and make a true connection with a possible future employer.
  • Terry M
    Terry M
    Very good information, I will use it when I redo my resume.
  • David C
    David C
    Interesting; but you know what THEY say, the proof is in the pudding.  Would love to hear feedback from those who made changes to their resume, and what were the results... ie: more call backs, more interviews, a new job.

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